I Love the Beach
A special and important place to me is the beach. I like the beach because it is so peaceful and quiet, other than the sounds of the crashing waves. You can also have so much fun down at the beach. You can play tag, hide and-go-seek, and one of my favorites, water football.
When I run on the beach I love the feeling of the burning sand on my feet. Sometimes it gets too hot and I have to find shelter under a tree or in the water. I usually go to the beach in the summer all day into the night. I love about the beach. Sometimes my mom let’s me go out really deep in the water--well, when it’s sunny and the waves are calm.
I love walking down the shore looking for dunes to climb up. Sometimes the dunes are really loose and dry so every time I take a step I just slide down a step. In this way I don’t make much progress. I also have a lot of bonfires at the beach in the summer.
When I go home and fall asleep, I dream about what I am going to do at the beach the next day.
- Drew Cannon
When I run on the beach I love the feeling of the burning sand on my feet. Sometimes it gets too hot and I have to find shelter under a tree or in the water. I usually go to the beach in the summer all day into the night. I love about the beach. Sometimes my mom let’s me go out really deep in the water--well, when it’s sunny and the waves are calm.
I love walking down the shore looking for dunes to climb up. Sometimes the dunes are really loose and dry so every time I take a step I just slide down a step. In this way I don’t make much progress. I also have a lot of bonfires at the beach in the summer.
When I go home and fall asleep, I dream about what I am going to do at the beach the next day.
- Drew Cannon

11 Comments:
I love all the relaxing sounds at the beach. Thanks for taking me there.
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Mr. Chittenden, at 9:27 AM
Drew, I agree it's a great place to collect your thoughts and have fun all at the same time.
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Anonymous, at 2:04 PM
Dear Derw,
Your writting was great! I to love the Beach. Have fun this summer. See you next year.
Dalton Tuggle
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Dalton, at 7:26 PM
Great story Drew! I love the feel of the burning sand on my feet to! See you next year!
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Arden clark, at 3:52 PM
Dear Drew,
I loved your writing!! Maybe we could go to the beach together this summer! Have fun the rest of the schoolyear and have a great summer!!
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Sam, at 7:46 PM
Hey drew, nice story i liked how u used detailed words and ur right the beach is FUN :)
Jake Russell
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Jake, at 2:29 PM
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Anonymous, at 2:35 PM
drew the beech is a really relaxing place.good story!have fun this year in 6th grade.
kerri
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Anonymous, at 8:48 PM
hi drew that is a sweet story keep up the great work
from aliyah
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Anonymous, at 8:30 PM
You write very well.
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Rhonda, at 1:04 AM
Hey Drew Its Aliyah Just saying Great Job and whenever i go 2 the beach i think of this story and it really makes me laugh.
P.S aliyah
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