I'll Admit It
Written the first week of school by Miranda Petersen.
I’ll admit it, I’m glad I got Mr. Chittenden for a fifth grade teacher, but this morning I felt nervous and excited at the same time. I also couldn’t sleep last night. I was so happy!
Over the summer I had fun going to Michigan Adventure, Chicago, and to parties. I also enjoyed playing with my second cousins. One of my cousins had a baby girl. We had a princess party to celebrate her birth. The baby’s name is Andrea. At the party there was a mini chocolate fountain to dip fruit, cookies, and anything that was on the table in. What I liked best was the games, not the mini chocolate fountain. I guess I don’t like chocolate that much. My cousin also has three boys!
In Chicago I watched the Chicago Fire soccer team play soccer. I also went out on the field with the players. I got a free jersey for going out on the field with them. At the end of the game some of the soccer players autographed a lot of stuff. I got three autographs. The players also gave away their shoes. It was so much fun!
When I went to Michigan Adventure I went on the Funnel of Fear and climbed up a wall backwards! My dad went off a drop-off backwards. On our Michigan Adventure trip we took my brother’s best friend. I didn’t like that at all, but I still had fun all summer long.
- Miranda Petersen
I’ll admit it, I’m glad I got Mr. Chittenden for a fifth grade teacher, but this morning I felt nervous and excited at the same time. I also couldn’t sleep last night. I was so happy!
Over the summer I had fun going to Michigan Adventure, Chicago, and to parties. I also enjoyed playing with my second cousins. One of my cousins had a baby girl. We had a princess party to celebrate her birth. The baby’s name is Andrea. At the party there was a mini chocolate fountain to dip fruit, cookies, and anything that was on the table in. What I liked best was the games, not the mini chocolate fountain. I guess I don’t like chocolate that much. My cousin also has three boys!
In Chicago I watched the Chicago Fire soccer team play soccer. I also went out on the field with the players. I got a free jersey for going out on the field with them. At the end of the game some of the soccer players autographed a lot of stuff. I got three autographs. The players also gave away their shoes. It was so much fun!
When I went to Michigan Adventure I went on the Funnel of Fear and climbed up a wall backwards! My dad went off a drop-off backwards. On our Michigan Adventure trip we took my brother’s best friend. I didn’t like that at all, but I still had fun all summer long.
- Miranda Petersen
5 Comments:
Dear, Connor
I thought that was thrid grade when you had to say your writing on the radio.From someone
By someone, at 6:41 PM
dear miranda i think that was a very nice story. i hope you get more of your writing on this blog. i hope i get some of my writing on like you did on the first week of school. i will write more later because i have to babysit a little five year old but anyway i really liked your story. oh buy the way guess who i am!
By b-ball friend, at 5:04 PM
Miranda,
If I were you I would like the mini chocolate fountain the best. Mmm. I can imagine everything in your story like I was there. How cool is it that you got to go on the field with the Chicago Fire! I loved your story.
McKenna
By Anonymous, at 5:52 PM
i know what you mean i felt really scared to. but it turns out i didn't need to be scared it cause it out fine.
from kerri
By Anonymous, at 2:56 PM
Nice job Miranda. The story was awsome! :)
Miranda
By Anonymous, at 2:37 PM
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